The night was young, and so were we
Princes and Princesses all
I have received a special invite
A 'Secret Garden' ball.
From every corner of the world, I bet
Came all the nobles and princes I met.
So handsome and friendly were they
I can only stare and drool their way.
The ladies were not to be outdone
Their hair, their makeup, of course, their gowns
Attracted the men at that event
They were VERY beautiful; that's what I meant!
The noble seated next to me,
Was so dashing, so bright,
With me alone, his time was spent
I'd never wish for this night to end!
He impressed me with his gentlemanly ways,
Oh yes, I think his name was Ace. [thanx nga pala sa token! :D]
The dancers on the dance floor, impressed me with their skills
I never knew queens could dance like that, with all their crowns and frills
Our turn soon came; we showed them all, that we can mambo to the beat
Kingdom Neutronia, [ROCK DA WORLD!] now that's one way to greet!
The food wasn't bad, [as compared to last year's,]
If it was, there were heads to be had.
I had scarcely finished my meal when;
They announced the royalties' dance.
The music began, we started to waltz..
I knew we were caught unprepared
We were quite busy these past few days;
For dancing, only so much time can be spared
A very good thing it was indeed:
My left foot was spared of its demise.
After the crowning [yes there was one!]
Of the Queen and King of all the young
The partying finally began.
A splash of color, here and there, was all that remains to be seen.
As we princesses mingled amongst the crowd
Red meets yellow. A touch of green.
All reveled in this world unseen.
The beat; it started to sound.
Quick movement followed. Spectacles flew,
As the frenzied dancers moved to the beat
Bedlam reigned, my hair was askew.
When will it be over? I can't take this heat!
When all quieted down, and the crowds seem to clear,
And when I heard not a single cheer
When all movement slowed, I realized then,
Too soon, too soon, this night did end.
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Wa.. wala lng... ka chui nun na night.. I really REALLY enjoyed it.. Thanks talaga JUNIORS for making our last prom a very special one.. Thanks rin sa teachers and mancom sa pag facilitate ng event [waa.. sorry po Sir Mancao!!]. Thanks sa Mer Allure for my hair and makeup.. sa Sheng's sa aking napakagandang gown, [sana akin nlng.. hahay..] I love the color to DEATH! [kahit na hindi siya fave color ko.. cge lng. :D] Thanks rin sa parents ko sa walang sawang pag suporta sa ako.... Uhm.. Nice effort, Neutron! We did our best, okay na iyon.. Congrats sa lahat ng nanalo.. u deserve it.. Congrats rin sa mga hindi nanalo.. cute pa rin tayo, hehe..
LOL, I'M GONNA PROGRAM A ROCKET IN THE FUTURE!!1!!!
Thank you Ace for making my last prom a special night! :D Sana maging gentleman ka rin sa next batch.. bantay ka lang. ^^
Thank you rin sa lahat ng nakasayaw ko.. Sorry nga pala kung natapakan ko kayo. :D
At ewan ko nalang sa mga paparazzi. Hahay. Dapat may copy ako ha! Bantay lang.
Sticks and stones are hard on bones
Aimed with angry art
Words can sting like anything
But silence breaks the heart
-nEOnIX
May this blog serve as a reminder to the NeoNix of the Pisay and Ateneo, in hopes that lessons may be learned from her (mis)adventures.
Saturday, February 9, 2008
PROM NIGHT HANGOVERRRRRRRR
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8 comments:
waaah.. Yoni! What a perfect way to narrate the event and so beautifully. (^ - ^)
still can't believe that prom is over. the poem sums the whole thing, bitter and sweet, up.
waaaaaaaahhhh!!!! hang-over nga tsOng!! yon, post mo ung mga pics mo.. post ko dn mga pics q s deviant acct. q.. hehehehe.. congrats s mga nnalo!! ei, ikaw b ung may copy ng "royal family" pic nmin nla anna?.. kung meron, psend beh.. pls...pls..plss..
I told you poems can be great even if they have a weird rhyme scheme.
Bleh!
nice poem :D hehe.
it was really a fun night. and the day after it was great too :) ang saya! mas masaya kesa last year. super :)
maka emo ung speech ni kiboy! lingaw ung prophecy! :)
WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! SANA MAULIT MULI ANG PROM!!!! ANYWEYZ, NAKAKAIYAK TALAGA ANG IYONG TULA B0RD! SADYANG ITO AY TUMAGOS SA AKING PUSO! MAGPATULOY KA SANA SA PAGSUSULAT NG MGA GANITONG MGA AKDA!^_~
yon, addict ka na sa mga poems. anyhow, i enjoyed reading it, too bad d mo na emphasize ung paghulog ng glasses mo:)). cge lang, and yeah, i enjoyed this year's compared to last year's. I dunno why, or if its just because we're seniors na...hehehehe
Well, it's good to see that you enjoyed the prom. I was actually going to ask you to dance but I ran outta time. Too bad.
Anyways, I enjoyed the narrative poem. I look forward to talking about it this week. Have a nice day!
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